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MR - Tame by Tailzkip (Chapter 4)

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A new series by the amazing creator behind Engine 999. This new series is called Tame and it focuses on a human named Kioshi and his cat demon named Nekeo. They are contracted together to help Kioshi learn and seek revenge on those who committed a bombing three years ago. There are other demons and a set of rules that is to be followed by each demon and their contracted human to ensure a smooth business transaction. But you know what they say about rules, all rules are meant to be broken or at least to some degree as time goes on. Let us begin!

Now, since the previous layout had me feeling unsure it was working well so I thought I would try altering it a bit to try and make it fit more for the fact it's a book. Sure an online comic but still, in my opinion, falls under a book so here are the new points I'm trying out to see how long it takes before they might not feel satisfactory again: Storyline (focus of the chapter, chapters or whole piece all together if complete), Visual (style and flow of the lines as well as detail), Characters (interactions with one another and their behaviors), and lastly Impact (did it cause any emotional feels and if so how well). Now let us begin!

> Storyline: This chapter we get right into meeting 2 new characters and a new location. Thanks to Hisao there has been new information source found involving the terrorist bombing. All looks fine and dandy but soon we get into the seeing that surface appearances are not what's really going on there. After Nekeo jumps in we have a very tear jerking heart-to-heart before things look to be turning around. Asashin makes his return but not to kill Kioshi. A cryptic answer is found and more questions arise with a warning being given by Asashin.

This is a bit darker with a sadder tone with not much, if any, funny bits to lighten it. The plot is thickening and even with the information we learn, more questions rise to the surface. This also seems to display a disregard on Hisao's part when it concerns Kioshi. I'm hopeful he was lax in his double checking the source due to Kioshi having Nekeo. Although he knows Nekeo appears to be lacking in an area or more where normal demons of his, or other, kinds shine at.

> Visual: The detail and design of the new place and characters are wonderful. It love the creepy and eerie feeling over the situation at the start. I really liked the display of emotion and the new casts members part. Asashin's was also wonderfully done with his entering the scene to his expressions, even the subtle ones. The atmosphere stayed tense and suspenseful with great movement of the characters. Blood again was done tastefully which is nice. It wasn't much blood but it was still wonderfully done to show how hard the impact was.

> Characters: Our 2 new cast members are Ryoko Fukui and her slave demon Doku which is a poison type. This pair, at least Ryoko, I don't think will be seen again. She was cold and intimidating. She didn't show remorse or anything after nearly killing an innocent human. She only dropped her guard for a moment before she was brought down and then we learn why. Doku was creepy and his slave form made sense given his speed and poison.

Kioshi and Nekeo both have great bonding during their heart-to-heart in the cell. I loved how we see how they feel about the other and even how Nekeo views himself when compared to Kioshi. It's interesting to hear how demons veiw themselves as compared to us. This was well done and made them feel even closer than before. The emotion in Kioshi's voice was wonderfully done.

Asashin's return was nice and smoothly done. He's just as cool as before and just as focused on completing his mission. He even gives Kioshi and Nekeo insight into Ryoko as well as how to force a demon to do something against their will. His energy about him was spot on and his grin is just as contagious as ever.

> Impact: This made me tear up and even shed a tear. It was full of emotion and seeing Kioshi cry brought me to tears. I love how they bonded this chapter and the way they opened up to one another. It feels genuine and natural between them. I also loved how the air stayed tense throughout until the end. Even then it still retained some of that tension with the mystery thickening. I loved Ryoko's energy and her coldness. She seemed to have a good setup but at the end she knew it couldn't forever last, and this was true when Asashin shows up to complete his mission. I felt bad for Doku given how he wasn't given much choice in the matter for who he killed.

It was another great chapter and whereas the previous one had the epic and exciting fight scenes, this one was more toned down. I enjoyed it and I'm still recommending this series to anyone looking for something new to read. As of this review it is ongoing so check out the description below.

As it's ongoing and a 5th chapter is scheduled to release this Saturday the 22, I decided to do a review of Chapter 4. This is a new series created by Tailzkip. I know I should catch on my Engine 999 reviews but I'm seeing if this other layout of points will flow better to do that. Anyways! Here is the review and now for credits and links for all you nice readers ^_^

Tame & and the mentioned Engine 999 both belong to :icontailzkip:

To read Tame Chapter 4 Click the Link: Tame Webcomic - CH4 Page 1 (Deviantart or look at it on Tapastic) tapastic.com/Tailzkip

To read the mentioned Engine 999 Chapter 1 Click the Link: Engine 999 Webcomic Series - CH1PG1

To read Tame Chapter 1 Review Click the Link: MR - Tame by Tailzkip (Chapter 1)

To read Tame Chapter 3 Review Click the Link: MR - Tame by Tailzkip (Chapter 3)

To read Tame Chapter 5 Review Click the Link: MR - Tame by Tailzkip (Chapter 5)

That is all for now and I hope people check out this series. ^^
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